cant say im too keen on the first one, a touch too nrg/ hard housey in its arrangement, its all a bit too obvious, the kick doesnt sound too bad, but the bassline need more bottom end.

numbtongue is alot better, its quite fresh sounding, like the bassline, the kick could do with more bottom end though.
i'd also like to hear those sticks or claves turned up a bit more, or maybe add a bit of extra reverb and delay to them, make them stand out more in the arrangement.

i also agree on losing the siren