I've got a few issues with the track, but most of them I think I can safely put down to the fact I'm remixing the same track and taking it in a different direction.

One of things I don't like is the use of the bassline loop provided, to me it sounds a bit out of place and it's a bit hapazradly just thrown in for most of the tune apart from during the breakdown. It's like the track is trying to go in two different directions to my ears and both are muddling each other up. To me it sounds like the major part of the track is just a bit too upbeat and energetic for that dark bass synth. That synth sometimes to get a bit lost in the track as well.

The track is also a bit long as well. If you think about it, if the track does make it onto vinyl it'll most likely be part of a 4 track EP so with a huge track like that it'll start to eat into the space on the vinyl and the quality will suffer as a result.

Anyway take it with a pinch of salt, as I said I'm doing a remix of it which is much darker which is how I hear that synth so my opinion is definately biased.