Well I do like the basic concept of the tune, but it is highly obvious that it is loop based. It could really use some edits in parts to keep the main drum loops more interesting. Also could use a bit of fatteing up in certain areas. Seems to be really thin in the mix. Although I'm only in headphones so I cannot tell for sure. Please don't take me wrong, the tune itself is good in idea and structure, but it does need a fair bit of work still I think.