now i think this could be a good track, it reminds me of the old 99 trance on torpedo records, but at the moment its sounds really strained.

i dont know what you did when you mastered it but id go back to the original sequence and work from there again, your percussion is too loud in the mix and its all kinda rough.

and your kick sounds like its coming in a few ms late, i think its be better to change the bass line timing if you want that kind of swing effect and keep the kick locked im properly because if people went to mix that now then all the percussion would sound out of time with the record mixing In and if they went to try and correct that then the kicks would start to sound messy together if you get me, just think itd be more mixing friendly if you sorted that out.

i dont think doing it all in one go is a good idea, you should leave it for the night when youve got the track down then come back the next day and listen to some allready released stuff of a similar style then go back into your sequence and start to mix it down, compairing between released material and your own as you go.


i like the track though it just needs a little more time spent on it.