hya mate, welcome to the forum.

just gave your file a listen


its sounding a bit over compressed to me, the kick is lost every so often and things sound a bit flat at the moment.

the actual track sounds decent though just needs work with the mixdown to clean it up somewhat, get it a bit more balanced and get the synths working together.

its just a personal opinion this but i think that the main lead synth sounds a bit too clubby to me, by that i mean it just makes me think of the more commercial dance music if you get me.

youve got a nice sequence there and the other sounds seem ok, i just dont think that main lead fits with them and maybe something a bit more gentle or a bit less 'special D' sounding might do it more justice, an entirely personal opinion though.