As for Soundclick and the lo fi ness of your files.
Scotts right its piontless asking what sombody thinks of your production then showing them somthings thats sonicly unflattering to your work no?

192 qulitymp3s at the least.


As for the tune not my bag but respect for trying somthing a bit different.
keep plugging away take your time and eventualy things will start to work ;)