yeah its too short for a track... but like you said its just a beginning....

Think you could get something really dark out of this ... what you've got so far sounds really nice ( I love the loop it starts with really nice and rolling) ... its really well produced...

only thing I'm not to sure about is the open hihat... I hardly ever like those.. unless they are very far back in the mix and only have really high frequencies...

Get a track out of this one !!!