Cheers Mark, thats all it takes, rather than people saying 'yeah mate its good' and then not commenting on more specific aspects of the tune.

I shall take those points and go away with them and try to improve on my mistakes, and learn about eq'ing a bit more.

And your right, I have got a long way to go, but I wanna make it, and desire is all you need.

Cheers Mark for the constructive comments, it really helps! :thumbs up: