Grraaahhh....

This tune has been sitting about for ages and I have lost my momentum.
Could really use some advice at this juncture, and maybe a bit of a steer.

So all feedback appreciated, constructive especially so.

However if you complain that it isn't banging acid I will find out where you live and murder your pets.

Bate - funky analogue techno - 134bpm

Work in progress...

http://www.logarhythms.co.uk/bate.mp3