i checked out your tune from the slightly higher quality file on your own website.

the whole gremlins thing is just too cheesy for me im afraid, if i could press a button and silence the riff then thres a decent structure to build a track on underneath but as for the riff and the synth sound youve given to it, its just sounding like some strange mainstream club track.

sounds like it needs much more time spent turning it into something more credible.

sorry to be negative mate but thats what i think, stuff the gimmicky ideas i say, imo you should delte the whole melodic parts and go back and turn it into something else from the structure you have got down.