First link works fine for me... ;)

Anyway, as usual Robin - inspired stuff.
More originality in 5 minutes than some people achieve ever.

Really digging the 8-bit vibe.

Lacks pace a bit? Would suit my ears a bit better if it felt faster...

Could possibly sound good with a bit of shuffle on it?

I'd bring out some amp simulation / distortion on some of those synth lines to dirt them up a bit.

I'm being hyper critical here, obviously ;)

Great stuff.