Nice man, i like this. Its something i could see myself producing. which i dont see a lot of.

Ok, i'll see if i can give you some production tips -

Its a bit loopy at the moment, it kind of drags on until something new comes in, and after the main kick drops, there isnt a lot much waiting there. Your kick isnt deep enough, or it isnt sitting right with the bass, try deepening the bass and sidechain the kick to duck the bass slightly when it hits. Those little atmospheric pads sound cool as ****, bring them right out of the mix, really widen them up and eq them to sit right. Id also try and add a bit of crunch to your percussion layer to make it a bit dirtier.

Really nice this tho man, its got a lot of potential. Build on the atmospherics of the track and then decide where you want to go from there.

Good work dude,

Q