Quote Originally Posted by Jay Pace
I like the rhythmic feel to it, and the industrial sound. Reminds me of old beyer stuff on drumcode.

I think you need to add a bit of sparkle in your high end, it gets a little muddy. EQ should be able to sort that, but at the moment it feels a bit like you have some really interesting elements but they aren't standing out enough, and are being drowned a bit.

The breakdown in the middle is interesting but seemed a bit disjointed IMO. It just cuts in out of nowhere, and then it lasts around a minute. I thought it was a little too long. Maybe work on blending it into the structure of the tune?

I really like the way the tune punches back after that pad sound. I reckon you could do more with that pad though. Its all on its own in the soundspace, you could absolutley fill it up with it, properly build anticipation for the tune punching back in.

Really though good mate. Wish I could make stuff with so many interesting features!
TNX dude!!!

I totally agree with you about the break... noticed that too when I was listing to the track again..... the is actually the first recording of it.. so after that I always start eqing and working the track out... so it should get better from here on..

Will make sure that break gets metal