Wiked! thanks for the feedback :)

Quote Originally Posted by eyes without a face
needs more work on effects, eq, compression etc, sounds quite dry at the moment... the kick is very loud and had a very dull sound to it, and the bassline doesnt fit with the chords, take a few notes out of the bassline and maybe shuffle them about a bit, very 1 2 1 2 at the moment if u get me

i like the chords but it does need more work, good start
Thanks! That’s got my mind going.
It does need some more crispness somehow and there does seem to be something missing in the middle range.
I will take into account your suggestions.

Quote Originally Posted by Mindful
Nice vibe for sure,The bass type stab is too loud tho and just aint sitting right,it also sound out of time(alltho you may have done that purposely in wich case cool)
I like the kick myself and personaly think the track would benifit from a slower tempo(but thats just me)
I like it so far.
Thanks!
The bass is meant to be out of timeish but it needs a bit more reworking to blend into the track better :)
It would sound cool at a lower tempo too, maybe I'll do a slower remix or perhaps an ambient version....hmmm

I'll post it again when I do some reworking of this one.