Quote Originally Posted by WezEnTiger
it isnt 14 minutes long !!!! :cry:
hes right :lol:

it shows up in media player as 14 + mins for some reason but if you load it into a audio package like soundforge it is actually about 10 mins long, must be down to the mp3 encode giving false time information in mediaplayer, still 10 mins is kinda long unless you have a lot of ideas to fit in.

just checked it out, like whats been said its much to long atm, takes 7 mins to get to the start of the main hook.

yeah you might want to rework the structure of this, get the whole track down to 6 mins or so, it kind of drags on at the mo with to many pauses along the way.

sounds pretty straight forward but all the sounds are clear, needs something lower and warmer in there though i think, at the moment its sounding very digital and fizzy in the top end, not to sure on the melody either, sounds like an old computer game or something right now.

fattening up the lead synth would help to.

that vocal sample youve chosen works really well though, i like the sound of that a lot.

to me this sounds like a combination of 2 things, a kinda silly sounding track and a really good deep sounding track at the same time

6:39 = absolutly love it at this part, sounds like prodigy meets m.i.k.e, great use of vocal sample and nice sense of atmopshere

8:23 = kinda silly riff comes in and changes the whole mood into somrhting a bit euro dancey

i hope i dont sound like im being a twat wez but this is genuinly my opinion on it, if you went back and based your track on the break down, subsituted the lead riff with some more deeper sounds and went from there i think youd have a stonker of a track unfold, im really loving the breakdown in it :love: