New tune,,,feedback appreciated.

[rackem]

Its 3/4 finished needs tweeking but any advice would be cool. This is my 1st techno track ive written. Cheers.


http://rapidshare.de/files/3972465/Mindphunk.mp3.html

[lau]

Not really my style... so wont comment on that..... mp3 seems to be low quality... so actually cant really comment on the mixdown too.....

Maybe post a direct link and a higher quality version...

[John Vella]

I got re-directed to some page.....

[rackem]

No worries, lookin into it. Also could any1 tell me how to automate a controller/parameter change in acid 5 i.e. to draw them in manually. Ive tried the diag block icon after selecting effect but nowt happening.
Cheers

[oldbugger]

No worries, lookin into it. Also could any1 tell me how to automate a controller/parameter change in acid 5 i.e. to draw them in manually. Ive tried the diag block icon after selecting effect but nowt happening.
Cheers

try posting that in the forum above this mate..you might get more help there :roll:

or maybe not coz ur a cunt :lol:

[dan the acid man]

i quite like this, i love the bassline, the way it meanders around

some of the noises could be a bit fatter maybe, and the bass a little warmer.

[rackem]

Only jelous, u cant even get a note outta a bin lid with a f-----g shovel...
;)

[rackem]

directed at o/b btw dan...not u

[Mindful]

Sorry im a bit thick where abouts on the page ive been sent to do I download the track?

[Traxx]

Click on the free bit at the bottom of the page. It will show up on the next page...

[Mindful]

Cheers traxx ;)

[Mindful]

The bass is pretty cool but needs to work with the kick a bit more.
Some of the sounds used are allright and the ideas are there but some elements panned around the stereo feild could work and a bit of deley here and there wont hurt I dont think (for example the backwards sound thats after the third beat in the very first groove pehaps pan it to say the left and have a reverb or delay in the right side,you get the picture)
maybe have some of the elements or some new elements doing a more subtle job.
And this is a personal taste thing but get rid of the crash and replace it with somthing a bit more unconventional perhaps.
Like Lau said not sure what bitrate the mp3 is so production wise cant comment.

Hope I dont sound too negetive about your track Its quite likable and for a first attempt at techno above what I was expecting keep it up :clap:

[rackem]

Thanks pal for giving it a whirl, much appreciated, can only improve with feedback from down to earth people who know their s--t. Thanks again
Si