The bass is pretty cool but needs to work with the kick a bit more.
Some of the sounds used are allright and the ideas are there but some elements panned around the stereo feild could work and a bit of deley here and there wont hurt I dont think (for example the backwards sound thats after the third beat in the very first groove pehaps pan it to say the left and have a reverb or delay in the right side,you get the picture)
maybe have some of the elements or some new elements doing a more subtle job.
And this is a personal taste thing but get rid of the crash and replace it with somthing a bit more unconventional perhaps.
Like Lau said not sure what bitrate the mp3 is so production wise cant comment.

Hope I dont sound too negetive about your track Its quite likable and for a first attempt at techno above what I was expecting keep it up :clap: