not bad, i have little problems with describing in english what i want to say, but xfive got the point in his post with everything - "hats are very prominant and sort of sit ontop of the whole mix, instead of blending in", i couldn't write it better :)
and i think ride cymbals are missing somewhere, i hear that they are in the background, but don't feel them.

anyway nice track, need a little work with it :)