I have just Done another mix down, I think it sounds better than before. I have done, quite alot of eqing and put some verb on the pads to widen them.

Anyway i have heard this tune too many times now, and am going to give it a break for a few days.

Cheers for all the advise given, I have learnt a lot from this.

http://www.studio61.org/tunes/EndOfSummerPT6.mp3