Quote Originally Posted by Fernando

I would take out that offbeat bass/synth at the start (perhaps replace with a sub bass), That flanged vocoding sounding thing sounded absolutley mental, I loved that, gave the track idenetity!.
Quote Originally Posted by Vin-iLL

Not with a very loud and too clean bassline at 0:37.
Quote Originally Posted by bryan sleiter

The bassline/low synth is nice, I like it best at the begining of the track, where the elements have room to breathe. before the higher synth comes in.

so, thanks for the comments but i am now confused about what to do with the track, it obviously needs more work, but where do i start, lots of different opinions. and would appear that i should start the track at 03:40 and work backwards. I suppose what i really would like to know now is, should i just scrap it completely and start again or should i really try and sort this thing out . I don't want to use the same sounds again, but it would be a shame to waste them. so any further views would be appreciated. I would also just like to point out that this track has not been eq,d or mastered in any way, it is just the rough mix that i have uploaded to get reactions and views on the general feel.

:)