This is pretty damn cool for the darker edge of wonk.
I`d say the production could use some work, although this kind of distorted stuff has a raw edge, you can still tweak it up a bit and "clean" it in a way.

I would agree with X5, in that the bass could do with more depth. And I`d also say that due to the distortion and the like, some of the edge has been taken off the top end, so maybe just add a little bit of sparkle in there.

But other than that, cool beans dude, interesting gear ;)