I think that it starts to sound trancy somewhere around the half way to 2/3 way through, right about when you have the synth tone come in. I like the first half pretty good and the first 1/4 the best!

Maybe more hats up high. I like when the ride cymbals come in. Of course ride symbals are the shizl. Maybe keep the more minimal synth (from the first quarterof the track) throughout. Add a nasty machine sound sample to offset the synth...

dunno, good start though. I like what you make.