hey ...
here's what I think.... mind u that u have 2 filter my views cause i'm not that into this particular style of techno...
The hole mix seems a bit swapped with reverb (maybe cut the bas from it)... it could b the mp3 thing but I would hold back a little bit on the amount off reverb... for instance the kick sound have a bit more of a balance between its dry sound and the reverbed 1...
Also I think it takes a little 2 build up...
The crazy synth line keeps the track moving and interesting... is that a Roland Xp 30-50-80 (or anything from the Jv-XV range) u r using??
Z