i think this could do with being tighter, sound wise. Theres quite a bit of reverb which softens everything up i think it would sound better if some of the sounds were sharper. The kick sounds good but the bass line isnt really fat enough for me maybe take a bit of compression off the bass. Not to keen on the synth that comes in off the main break. Other than that i liked it! think with a few tweaks could be a very good tune