Guess where I was and what time of day it was

[xfive]

Yeah the top end is much better now on this

[BloodStar]

haha. this is cool track. u ve got your own style, deffo. this would be a real bomb when properly mixed and mastered,. this would kill people on the dance floor,, i'm sure :) nice and different. production, could be much more precise i think. do it wider, more warmth and you area winner. interesting stuff.

[Mindful]

Kin hell mate your crazy.

Hats off this tracks the bolloks ,Very original.

Wicked :clap:

[morphamish]

Wicked, cheers guys, glad you like the style of it. :)

Yesterday I took the opportunity to tweak the track on a couple of pas and I reckon I've now got it sounding how I want it. I hope it meets your standards folks! I think the synth is more defined now, and the kick pins it a bit better, but with depth too. The hihats and other percussion have had a lift too. Hopefully its a tighter sound now, with more energy.

It was working for me over the soundsystems and stood up at home so I'm going to go for it and press it. Hopefully I'm not being foolhardy and rash, but I think its sounding as good as I am capable of making it with the knowledge I have at this stage!

Thanks again for all the excellent advice and perspective, hope you like the final version...

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