orac - plane crash [HARD TECHNO]

[orac]

orac - plane crash

http://www.filefactory.com/get/f.php...a82f8fbbe79e87

[orac]

link from filefactory.com is not working, so here are two from yousendit (sorry):

link:
http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2...122X0H2G1BCAG7

mirror:
http://s39.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0...O2E29KOC710ZVX

[nova]

wikked synth work man. nice job ;)

[orac]

thanks ! :)

[BRADLEE]

Man you just get better and better homie. Keep up the great work...I really have no critiques for this. It is a rocking tune indeed.

[orac]

good to hear you like it :)

[audioinjection]

not too bad dude, nice hard bangin track to get my day going.....nice little edits in there, but theres a synth in there that sounds like it should come through some more, not sure if im liking that synth melody in there though........but thats just me :)

i think if u do something more with it, it would be dope

[orac]

i understand what you are talking about :) this synth could be more "dynamic" now i think and about those synth melodies in breakdowns, ermm i just like them ;) thanks for advice friend !

[dirty_bass]

Nice work dude, you are definitely getting better.
Good pounding stuff.

The bottom end on this is lovely.
The top end however is out of balance, so this feels bottom heavy. Volume wise the kick and the hats should be roughly balanced, so I think you could do with getting this all a bit more level.
In the beginning there is a little what sounds like a synth that is very low in the mix, I think this could be brought out a little more.
The edits are all superb.
I love the elephant sound at 1:45 fantastic.
The synth at 2:30 that repeats could be brought out a little more.

As a whole you have a solid (maybe just a touch too muddy) bottom end, bright top end, but slightly undefined mid range that could be fuller and more separated.

Don`t take this critique the wrong way, this is pretty good, and I`m just talking minor tweaks and stuff for final polish.

As a personal taste issue the synth that comes in at 4:05 I found to be a little cliche "ravey" and you probably could do with using something a bit meaner and less cheesy. But that`s down to taste.
I don`t generally dig this kind of techno any more, it tends to be just too loopy and predictable, however with this tune there is a lot to hold your interest.

Good Work.
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[orac]

wow, thanks for such a long comment & hints, this is very helpful for sure :)

[BloodStar]

nice track. also like the elphant synth, as steve said. very much elephantic :) nice edits here and there also works well. dont like the main synth at around 4 mins. some meaner ambient thing could pass there better maybe, but ok. production sounds nice. maybe it§s little too much bottom heavy, but u can fix it,. ok. nice one.. !