listening now. i like the start but i dont like the flam hat (but i've never liked heavy flam so its just a personal thing). the subtle percussion that comes in at 55 secs is nice. the whole track is more laid back than i'd normally like but its not bad. some of the sounds need a bit more movement to bring them to life. i like the change at 6:28 although its a little too close to the end. overall not a bad effort.