forgot to check this out on the monitors.

Lovely this.
Nice width to the track, seems like you have covered the full range and it gives this a very professional feel.
I agree with X5, the main hi hat doesn`t sit right. It may just be that you have emphasised it with the eq in a bad place. It seems to be over resonant.
Things do get crowded later on, so I would suggest cutting things down a bit more withy subtractive eq, so they all sit together more comfortably.

the kick could be clearer, I think it`s fighting with the bass a bit, so I think emphasising the kick in the mid-high bass region, and then letting the sub sit underneath ir may clear this up.

But I still like the track. It has elements of progressive house, as well as techno, and some dark-cintematic vibes too, but it all fits together nicely.

Good track.