This tune is in progress. Im not sure if i should keep the 'Realm' sample in there.
Please leave any suggestions.
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05-08-2003, 12:10 PM #1Junior Freak
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[Hard Trance] New to Blackout, Please rate my first tune
I am but a mushroom,
Kept in the Dark and fed on Shit.
But hey, I love my Shrooms!!!!
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05-08-2003, 12:12 PM #2Junior Freak
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OOOOPs
The link may help
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/shockandawemusic.htm :lol:I am but a mushroom,
Kept in the Dark and fed on Shit.
But hey, I love my Shrooms!!!!
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05-08-2003, 02:24 PM #390's Trance head
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a classic sound to this, dj choci popped into mind while listening to this.
only the lo fi version worked for me though :( , i dont think soundclick website likes me as hi-fi allways crashes my media player :?Sequence is coming. It's going throughout your imagination. It takes you where you've been before. A higher state of mind. Yeah, you remember the early times. Now were trying to take you again. In the deepest seas of your consciousness.....Time never stops
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05-08-2003, 08:16 PM #4BOA Lifetime Member
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Well made so far mate , just need to hype up thats clap , just a tad to cheesy we think !
Tune sits well , aiming for a defo trance tune there man !
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05-08-2003, 08:18 PM #5BOA Lifetime Member
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and tame down on the hats a bit man , they taking over the tune to much !
but minto in our books !
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06-08-2003, 12:41 AM #6Supreme Freak
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yeah I would say ease off the hats ....not sure about the sample , maybe chop it down a bit ??? , but then hey wadda I know :D
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08-08-2003, 07:57 PM #7Junior Freak
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Cheers lads.
Agree with theclaps being a bit cheesy.
Did think the hats were ok but need a bit of variety. But critism is good.
I know the sample'sbeenusedtomany times. Think im gonna have to lose it :( ( fits so well!!)
SLIMI am but a mushroom,
Kept in the Dark and fed on Shit.
But hey, I love my Shrooms!!!!
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08-08-2003, 10:32 PM #8Ultimate Freak
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Good Track :D , think the sample goes well, even thought it has been used before, i would stick with it and try and **** around with it a little see how it sounds...
There potential is there!!! :D
P.S: love the bassline though!!"His Armband Said He was Red
Torres Torres,!!!
Youll Never Walk Alone it Said
Torres Torres!!!
We bought the lad from sunny Spain,
He'll get the ball, he'll score again
Fernando Torres!!!
LIVERPOOLS NUMBER 9"
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08-08-2003, 10:33 PM #9Ultimate Freak
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Good Track :D , think the sample goes well, even thought it has been used before, i would stick with it and try and **** around with it a little see how it sounds...
There potential is there!!! :D
P.S: love the bassline though!!"His Armband Said He was Red
Torres Torres,!!!
Youll Never Walk Alone it Said
Torres Torres!!!
We bought the lad from sunny Spain,
He'll get the ball, he'll score again
Fernando Torres!!!
LIVERPOOLS NUMBER 9"
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08-08-2003, 10:35 PM #10Ultimate Freak
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhh!!!!!
Double post!!!!! Doh"His Armband Said He was Red
Torres Torres,!!!
Youll Never Walk Alone it Said
Torres Torres!!!
We bought the lad from sunny Spain,
He'll get the ball, he'll score again
Fernando Torres!!!
LIVERPOOLS NUMBER 9"
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09-08-2003, 02:34 PM #11Junior Freak
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Cheers mate.
Will be workingon the tune 2day.
(The bass is Phat isnt it.)
(to be updated)I am but a mushroom,
Kept in the Dark and fed on Shit.
But hey, I love my Shrooms!!!!
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09-08-2003, 11:40 PM #12Junior Freak
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OK lads, major change inpercs, ramped the bass more, and added some FX (i know the to loud at he start.)
Pleaselet me know if its better.
PHAT PHUCKERI am but a mushroom,
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But hey, I love my Shrooms!!!!
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10-08-2003, 02:59 PM #13Supreme Freak
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yeah , I like it more now :D , the section from 2.02 is good
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13-08-2003, 08:17 AM #14BOA Lifetime Member
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Much better build now , just need some Atmosphere like you had in the first mix , just give it that special touch of unique sounds !
Cool !
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