"What I'm mainly interested in here is some analysis of the production style/ quality. Probably over-excited it a bit, and yes that breakdown is dreadful I know. Any ideas as to how I could structure the track when I actually do make a full song out of it as opposed to a couple of patterns chucked toghether would be very much appreciated too of course. "

as i am very interested in the production style/quality thing myself i will surely give it a listen and inform you about what i think.

i myself am getting more into structuring myself step-by-step as that is something have to make myself do. so hopefully i will be able to supply you with ideas on that, too. :devilish: