Bloody noice work man.
I only listened to the second version. I found it sweet as. Everything in its place from this end.
The thing i liked most was that subtle undertone throughout the track, i found that I listened to that mostly while everything was going kaoss around it. Very catchy element. Its hard to say if i would make that tone more a prominent feature of this track or not....?? I would like a version that really showcased that tone in a way....like bring it out by itself during the track somehow?? It is a mad frequency and it is addictive in a way. As I type this I can still hear it clearly.

There is a good mix of beats and sounds too. Trippy vocals that are twisted enough to be taken widely. Percs are pretty std techno stylee but I think that there are enough other things going on that are original enough for this track to stand out. Its also hard to say if the bottom end is developed enough as well?? I found that it lacked some character here but that may be opinion rather than suitability.