Had a listen to this today, its not too bad mate, Quirky.
Not sure if you were after comments on production but ........
I think that maybe you could get much more out of the track if you can give the rest of the percussion a bit more volume.
I belive the snare could stand out a bit better with a bit of volume,eq work and compression.
Also maybe the hats could be a bit louder and be spead out a bit wider around the stereo feild.
The main riff/bass sounds realy nice and meaty so I think if you get the hats and snare to stand out with it then it will sound much better.

Welcome to the board.