I like this.
At first I was waiting for some sort of bass line to come in but when it reaches the break it realy fills out Freq wise and stereo wise.
The synths nice as is the vocal(alltho maybe could be a bit louder in the mix, but maybe not)
I do think it would sound much better if you got the snare punching thru the mix rather than how its quite far back at the moment.

Allways your stuff is different.

I like.