Interesting.. second breaks track in a row I've listened to now..
This one is kinda muddy tho man... needs a lot of brightening and the whole low-mid kick area is way muffled.
And as I suggested with the other breaky track, you need a lot more bass in this, if not an entire bassline, to keep things moving along.

The bits and pieces are nice however the production needs a lot of work to bring each piece out to it's fullest ;)