Thanks for comments and your ideas Bloodstar I will try to use them ;)
I have tried to give it a bit more stereo width than before and done a little more on the mix,added another bassline(even tho I was struggling with just the one)
I think im going to have to realy shape the basslines and kick much better as suggested(I realy wanted the rythms and atmosheres to lead the track rather than the kick and bass so Im a bit stuck doing this)

Ive also extended the intro and built a bit more on the atmospere(try not to fall asleep before the intros done lol)

Anyway im waffling now so......

http://beta.yousendit.com/transfer.p...FA7CEAAA42C6BE

I realy would be thankfull for any help or advice on the production on this one.
Thankyou :)