It's nice, as usual i love the edits a ton.
The way it opens up for its breaks to let
the melody straggle in is awesome as well.
I'd watch the frequency coming out of the
break, maybe give tone down the percussion
loop, or filter it to another frequency, it sounds
like its crowding it a little. Maybe a tad more
action on the low end?

Either way, great stuff!

-&rew