instead of taking those lyrics, why not conjure up some of your own?
that way its innovative, although dont go down the cheesy pop trance route please.(alice deejay, ian van dahl, dj sammy, etc)

ive got to hand it you mate, you've taken my harsh comments with great patience. i apoligise for been harsh, and i know its not the first time that we have had a little run in. i just think its vital to come up with new ideas, i think thats why trance/hard trance is stuck at the moment, there seems to be a serious lack of imagination within the music. try think of something diffrent, and go with it, borrowing ideas from other tracks, and more notably commercial vocals is not the way forward.

peace