alrite dude... im listening now, and it sounds ok.. its a nice idea, but it does sound quite thin if u know wat i mean.. there is very little bottom end... have u used EQ atall.. it sounds like it could do with a fair bit of eq'ing to bring it to life.. and also compression may help to tighten things up.. its very basic.... some more sounds in there, and maybe some effects on the riff would bring it to life... i like connecting the cv curve to a filter and playing around with a bp filter setting... anyway.. keep at it bro... practice makes perfect!!