I don`t really dig this kind of techno, so I won`t comment on taste.
Production wise however I found this to be a bit slack.
The kick lacked real analog warmth and size.
Hats were a little thin and dry.
The bongo loop was also dry and sounded like an unprocessed loop.

I`d say maybe this could do with more warmth overall as it is trying to sound analogue.
MAybe more saturation on the bass and kick.
Some light reverb on the hats.
Also a touch of reverb and some compression on that bongo loop to make it a bit more dynamic.
Maybe some interesting edits hear and there to add to the quirkyness too.