Quote Originally Posted by eyeswithoutaface
production wise, sorry needs a fair bit i thought, alot more EQ needed to seperate the elements, really could do with widening the frequency spectrum more id say. More processing overall definately, such as verbs and compression, and as i said some good EQ work. Could really do with a bassline in there too, as it just feels like the listener's waiting for something to kick when it doesnt, and this kind of techno really needs something else to carry it along, a banging kick just doesnt do. Also i dont think the timing's correct on the small breakdown around the 3 min mark where its just the bass and a hat playing

good start though
I agree with eyes on a few things here, firstly the vocals wouldnt be my cup of tea, a bassline would do it the world of good, and a bit of eq and maybe a bit more compression on the kick would make it a little nicer on the ear, other than that I'm lovin' the percussion, Its good but does still need a bit of work and I personally think you sety yourself high standards with the internatonal ep so maybe I'm being a bit harsh!!