ohhh. gettin all funky on us ritchie!!! lovely synth. i'd reverb it a bit but thats my own opinion... again you've got that nyc style goin on...

right i think this has potential but i personally would use differant sounds on it.. i think you know what you wanna do as your style is very specific and thats good i just think you need to process sounds better... but most importantly the tunes are there. so thats more than half the battle. good work.