@ IQ and D_B
amazing advice and feedback thanks so much.

IQ
I havent seen you on here for a bit or heard any music from you for a month or so, good to see you(well on here anyhow)

Steve
I long for your critical asshole stick it keeps me on my toes and pushing forward.

I will use what every one has said and try to use it to push this track on to somthing more than it is at the moment.
Realy huge thanks for all comments and advice.