Heres a few things I have done recently, nothing impressive, just looking for a little feedback for further learning etc

Cheers All...

Uplifty Trance - http://www.angelfire.lycos.com/music...n_Progress.mp3

Progressive Trance - http://www.angelfire.lycos.com/music.../corbzprog.mp3

I'm having huge difficulties writing melodys for after the breaks in these tunes...I wrote one for the Prog tune but it sounded really out of place, any ideas etc much appreciated...

Cheers Again...