Heres a few things I have done recently, nothing impressive, just looking for a little feedback for further learning etc
Cheers All...
Uplifty Trance - http://www.angelfire.lycos.com/music...n_Progress.mp3
Progressive Trance - http://www.angelfire.lycos.com/music.../corbzprog.mp3
I'm having huge difficulties writing melodys for after the breaks in these tunes...I wrote one for the Prog tune but it sounded really out of place, any ideas etc much appreciated...
Cheers Again...
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02-09-2003, 02:58 AM #1BOA Lifetime Member
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[Broken Link]few bits I been working on feedback appreciated
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02-09-2003, 03:18 AM #2BOA Lifetime Member
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Fudd me!
I've just listened back to those tracks again to check the links were working and how boring are my tracks!!!
And the lead in my prog tune keeps ****ing up, can you here it?
Hmmm, gonna have to vote No... :lol:
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02-09-2003, 12:04 PM #390's Trance head
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uplifting track - structure wise ur improving mate, you just need to work on the treatment of the sounds now, when this track hits the 56 second mark it gets goin quite nicely though
progressive track - strange flangey sound, reminds me of an element from the resi evil sound track actually,like the bass line that comes in at 54 seconds. the structure of this ss acttaully quite decent, you just need to open up the sounds more and add some more elemts to give it depth.
i must say mate your coming along quite well from a month or 2 ago, keep at these , lookin forward to hearing what u come up with :DSequence is coming. It's going throughout your imagination. It takes you where you've been before. A higher state of mind. Yeah, you remember the early times. Now were trying to take you again. In the deepest seas of your consciousness.....Time never stops
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Yay!! :D
Cheers EmoCom... :thumbs up:
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03-09-2003, 02:24 PM #5Ultimate Freak
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I dont really care, your a twat... 8) 8) 8) lol :? what do u expect :?
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03-09-2003, 02:41 PM #6Ultimate Freak
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I had a listen to your last one corbz mate and I'll have a listen to this one when I get home, and I voted "I don't care your a twat" because you asked for it really!
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03-09-2003, 06:39 PM #9BOA Lifetime Member
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Definatley showing improvemnt mate , keep at it , get some nice long hours in and no sleep , it pays off !
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yarrrr! i want to make a tune likes logs hardstyle tune now :lol:
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03-09-2003, 06:43 PM #11BOA Lifetime Member
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Logger head is a wicked litte producer aye !
He wil go far and maybe teach us the Jedi ways !
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