[techno] crisp - logic damage

[Crisp]

Hello everyone, it's my first post on forum. Here is a link to my new track. I don't know what genre it is?! dark? industrial? experimental? techno. Anyway go and listen, any feedbacks welcome.

http://www.pure.pluton10.com/mp3/cri...c%20damage.mp3

or short http://tinyurl.com/jpue4

p.s. i think sounds better on +2% pitch :eyes:

[Crisp]

mirror: http://s64.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0...U0ONLCJACU6WZG

[xfive]

Ah, a bit of acid here sounds like
The ideas sound pretty complete but the mix needs some warmth and such. . it's pretty cold sounding. Could go for a lot more bass in there, and bring the kick out more.. it should be much more prominient..
Right now it sorta limps along :cheese: But fixing that will give the track a lot more power

[MARKEG]

yeah there's no bass here. all sounds too cold and distant. really love the madness going on here though.. this could be such a great track eh need to work bloody hard on it though...

[Crisp]

eh... yeah you're right, thats a good time to buy new monitors!;) thanks for advice. best regards

[dirty_bass]

Agree with the above.

Bottom end is lacking here.
Overall I like the tune, it`s nice and driving and remids me of Emperion for some reason.

The mix could do with a little more width in the stereo field, and the sounds feel a little wooden, and could do with more warmth and movement.

[BloodStar]

quite like this track. not my style but i quite enjoyed the listen. production part of thing needs to be sorted little better, as already was said.