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    I'm doing some livepa at a big event in chicago in 2 weeks which i'm writing a lot of deeper stuff for. any and all feedback would be appreciated, particualary about the composition and flow of the track!


    http://213.129.73.14/members/my_trac...8094160048.mp3


    thank you.

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    Cool... It's got a good build for something that's supposed to be deep and sparse.

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    it's just a little too deep for the style that I play, but I do like it quite well. Is very well constructed and has a nice bit of movement also for being such a deep tune. Thanks for sharing man, and keep up the nice works.

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    Nice stuff.
    I`d maybe wet down that hi hat just a little.

    I did find that it took a little long for anything significant to happen in this.
    I`d maybe cut down the first half by about a minute or more.

    could also do with something else happening, some deep subtle basic channel style synth stabs or something, as I find my mind wandering by half way.
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    nice track. not my style, but quite like the deep and kinda minimal feeling. sounds little boring at some parts and also the buildup in the beginning is little long. production part of thing is not bad,.feel the nice depth in it. just the kicks are not working the best together at some parts, dont know...
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    nice feel to this.
    Nice depth in the stereo feild and.
    Realy gets grooving at the half way mark.
    Aggree with above in that it could benifit from some more movment in the first half just a few things of intrest.
    halfway onwards good stuff.

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    thanks again for the help everybody!

 

 

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