Ok, I procced little bit with this piece. I reworked it into full track, and also work harder on production, and i think it now sounds better than first version, even i am still not 100% satisfied with it, so i will need to spend some more time on it.hehe..
looking forward to any pointers and ideas..thx

http://www.bloodstar.info/downloads/...All-V2-192.mp3