Quote Originally Posted by xfive
Well I think you ideas are cool, it has promise.
You need to fix that kick to be a lot more prominent. Much more bottom end to it. Could also get your bass to go deeper and eq out a bit so as to not interfere with the kick. Try some compression on them too, possibly even together on the same bus.
Couldn't have said it better myself really. Lots of cool ideas and could turn out to be a real beast.