Like this, it`s nice to hear something less reliant on ambience.

Production feels a little muddy, and the problem area seems to be the high bass to mid area.
Needs more separation in there.

Very paranoid feeling going on in this.

Not a fave of mine, but mostly for the way it makes me feel. Very edgy and tense, too many thoughts to comprehend, and a little paranoid.
Like my brain is going a 1000 miles per hour.
And I feel like that enough as it is.
haha

Clean it up a bit I reckon, everything else I love.