Hi mate! Had a listen to the track, I prefer the section from about 2:40, as it seems a little disjointed before this (but is really just tweaking the arrangement). I like the compressed kick, very tight! I'm sure a quality finished track will emerge from this, and like other members have said it beats many of the current Acid/Techno releases. I would say that with slight adjustment to the level of some of the percussive parts, and a reworked intro, you're onto something good. Ed